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Pastikan Anda telah mengupdate link yang dikirimkan kepada Anda, jadi ketika referal Anda mendaftar, AGLOCOTM menggunakan user ID Anda. Link harus sesuai dengan format berikut http://www.agloco.com/r/ABCD1234, dimana ABCD1234 adalah ID yang diberikan oleh AGLOCOTM.

Email #1: Pendekatan Analisis

Saya baru bergabung menjadi bagian dari AGLOCOTM, sebuah jaringan ekonomi Internet yang diluncurkan beberapa minggu yang lalu. Intinya, AGLOCOTM memberikan para Anggotanya bagian pendapatan yang mereka (para pemakai Internet) hasilkan. Slogan mereka adalah ‘Menjadi Bagian Internet’. Mereka juga memberikan seluruh kepemilikan perusahaan kepada para Anggotanya (100% dimiliki Anggota) – Anda mendapatkan lebih banyak uang jika Anda mengajak Anggota baru, inilah alasan mengapa saya mengirimkan ini kepada Anda.

Keanggotaan AGLOCOTM GRATIS. Diantara para pendirinya adalah beberapa mahasiswa Stanford dan juga orang-orang yang pernah meluncurkan AllAdvantage pada 1999, yang telah memiliki jutaan Anggota dan membayar lebih dari $120 Juta kepada mereka. Jadi mereka bekerja kembali…. Hebatnya, pengguna tidak akan kehilangan apapun, sebab yang dilakukan hanyalah – mendaftar, mengajak orang lain bergabung, dan menggunakan Internet seperti biasanya.

Jadi, klik link berikut dan mendaftarlah sekarang juga. Gunakan nomor ID saya ABCD1234 jika meminta nomor ID. Setelah mendaftar kunjungi http://agloco-indonesia.blogspot.com/ sebagai panduan membangun jaringan Anda.
[Nama Anda]

Email #2: Pendekatan Perhatian

Pernah memperhatikan di Internet bahwa beberapa orang mendapatkan uang (YouTube, Google, MySpace, eBay, Skype, etc.).

Sebagai para pengguna, kita biasanya tidak mendapatkan apapun – ya saya baru bergabung dengan AGLOCO dan satu-satunya tujuan adalah mendapatkan para anggota bagian mereka berupa penghargaan yang mereka dapatkan di Internet (segalanya dari pencarian dan penghasilan iklan kepada pengguna – dari isi situs).

Anda bisa memeriksa situsnya untuk melihat bagaimana AGLOCO melakukannya, namun dari tempat saya, saya hanya menggunakan Internet sama seperti biasanya, dan mereka bekerja di balik sana untuk mengumpulkan uang untuk saya.

Satu keistimewaan yang saya suka adalah mereka menghadiahi orang-orang yang membantu membangun jaringan (inilah mengapa saya mengirimkan Anda email ini). Klik pada link ini untuk menuju AGLOCO (gunakan nomor member id saya), dan bergabung dengan jaringan saya www.agloco.com/r/ABCD123 GRATIS!

Saran saya: gabung sekarang – ajak semua teman-teman Anda dan mari kita menjadi bagian dari Internet.
[Nama Anda]

Email #2: Pendekatan Alasan

Perusahaan-perusahaan dan pemasang iklan menghasilkan uang dari kita. Setiap membeli sesuatu, melihat iklan, bahkan mencari lewat search engine, apa yang kita dapat? Adakah penghargaan yang mereka berikan?

Tahukah Anda sekarang ada sebuah perusahaan di luar sana yang telah merubah semua itu. Siap kaget? Anda akan dibayar setiap kali kita online di Internet. Ya benar. Anda skeptis? Inilah alasan mengapa kita harus bergabung:

- Anda akan dibayar ketika online. Ya benar, ini bukan main-main. Anda cukup mendaftar dan GRATIS.
- Perusahaan adalah milik Anda. Karena Anda juga berhak atas sejumlah saham yang akan dilepas.

Terbaik dari semuanya, siapapun yang bergabung lebih awal dan membantu membangun perusahaan mendapatkan lebih. Jadi klik disini www.agloco.com/r/ABCD1234 untuk bergabung dengan member ID saya dan beritahukan teman-teman Anda tentang perusahaan ini.
[Nama Anda]

Anda memiliki teman di luar negeri? Gunakan contoh format email berikut dalam bahasa Inggris:

Email #4: Email dengan format bahasa Inggris

You deserve to be Paid

AGLOCOTM is a global community, whose owners are its Members (you and potentially the millions of internet users out there). Their goal is to capture a significant portion of the value generated by our online activities and return it to Members in cash.

This note is mainly to offer you a chance to help build AGLOCOTM – it is a Member-owned Internet community.

Here is why I would like you to help. First – it is free. Second - it is quick and easy to join. Third – AGLOCO’s purpose is to get its members their share of the money generated on the Internet (i.e. you make money). And lastly – if you help build the AGLOCO network you can make much more.

Here is a link to sign up (it automatically records me as referring you with my ID ABCD1234) www.agloco.com/r/ABCD1234 or you’ll join whenever you can, but don’t forget to fill “Referral ID Number” with ABCD1234.

AGLOCO works with a toolbar type software called a Viewbar. Privacy is very strict so no spyware, popups or spam.

As to how much money you can make, there is a study which says the average user should get $5 to $15 a month. (But less at the beginning.) Click below to read the report.

http://simmonsreport.spaces.live.com/How much can you make helping to build the network? The Simmons Report predicts $30 per referral. I have 800, but a friend of mine RZ McCall has over 8,000. He has a great blog site http://mccallsnotes.spaces.live.com.

AGLOCO is in their beta phase which is the best time to help them build out the network. So please join now and help build the network. Have questions? Their website has all the details so go there www.agloco.com/r/ABCD1234 or ask me.
Thank you.
[Your Name]

Email #5: Email dengan format bahasa Inggris 2

WHAT IS AGLOCO?

Ever notice on the Internet that some people are making all the money
(YouTube, Google, MySpace, eBay, Skype, etc.)

As users, we usually get nothing - well I just joined AGLOCO and its sole purpose is to get its members their share of the value created on the Internet (that's everything from search and advertising revenue to user-generated content sites).

You can check out the site to see how AGLOCO does it, but from my standpoint I just use the Internet the same as usual, and they work in the background to collect money for me. One feature I really like is that they reward the early people who help build out the network.

To be more specific, AGLOCO has a Viewbar which will gain revenue for us. All we have to do is download and run it for 5 hours a month. Only 5 hours. The Viewbar is still in testing process so this is the time perfect time to recruit new members before anyone else gets them :) So be a member now and tell your family and friends about it. We will grow the economic network, AGLOCO, together and we will enjoy the revenue it generates together.

AGLOCO is just like AllAdvantage of 1999. It generated 200 million dollars revenue and distributed 120 million dollars to its members. It reached 10 million users in 18 months. AGLOCO has a goal of reaching 10 million members in only 6 months. And they will distribute 90% of their revenue to us, members. But it is important to be an early member who will help AGLOCO grow. You will be rewarded even more for that. There are people who received $25,000 from AllAdvantage but they were early members who recruited more. Besides that, there were members who earned a modest $45 a month for not doing much of work. This all brings us to conclusion: AGLOCO is worth a shot.

AGLOCO's story is simple:
Do you realize how valuable you are? Advertisers, search providers and online retailers are paying billions to reach you while you surf. How much of that money are you making? NONE!
AGLOCO thinks you deserve a piece of the action.

AGLOCO collects money from those companies on behalf of its members. (For example, Google currently pays AOL 10 cents for every Google search by an AOL user. And Google still has enough profit to pay $1.65 billion Dollars for YouTube, an 18-month old site full of content that YouTube's users did not get paid for!)

AGLOCO will work to get its Members their share of this and more.

AGLOCO is building a new form of online community that they call an Economic Network. They are not only paying Members their fair share, but they're building a community that will generate the kind of fortune that YouTube made. But instead of that wealth making only a few people rich, the entire community will get its share.

What's the catch? No catch - no spyware, no pop-ups and no spam - membership and software are free and AGLOCO is 100% member owned. Privacy is a core value and AGLOCO never sells or rents member information.

So do both of us a favor: Sign up for AGLOCO right now! If you use this link to sign up, I automatically get credit for referring you and helping to build AGLOCO.
http://www.agloco.com/r/ABCD1234/
Thank ‘s.
[Your Name]

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